Kids under the age of 12 should not be playing video games.

Yesterday I started on a persuasive writing for why kids under the age of 12 should not be playing video games.  I am going to show you the writing that I did. I think kids under the age of twelve should not be playing video games. Here is my writing.

 I think that kids under the age of 12 should not be allowed to be playing video games. Kids under the age of 12 should not be playing video games here are some reasons why. 

Firstly, there is violence in these games. Like maybe there is cutting people or murdering people. We don’t want little kids seeing that. 

Secondly, the language in some video games has swearing. The swearing in the games could encourage some kids to use it in their everyday life.  Some are so bad that some kids don’t know what it means and they say it anyway. 

Thirdly what will they see in the games? Yes they will see the violence but what else do they see. They might see some inappropriate images that they should not be seeing at all what so ever. 

So now you have seen all of my reasons for why kids under the age of 12 should not be playing any video games. With either violence,bad language or  inappropriate scenes.  I hope you will change your mind.

BYE UNTIL NEXT TIME